they, their, them, ahem . . . (or very well, consider this . . .)
Singular/plural mismatches between subject and
pronoun can be avoided, and in most cases, effortlessly and naturally.
Here are some
examples:
When a teacher gives
timely feedback, their students benefit.
Ask everyone what
toppings they want on their ice cream sundaes.
If your child asks
for a present from Santa, you will you try your hardest to get it for them.
Notice that teacher, everyone, and child are singular subjects.
Notice that their, they, and them are plural pronouns.
This phenomenon is
ubiquitous. I don't consider it correct
because it is common any more than yelling at kids is correct because it is
common. I also consider it inoffensive
(unlike yelling at kids), so why bring it up?
Because at the technical but not
arcane level, this is not a logical match and some people will be distracted by
it. When we write, we want our message
and writing to flow without interruptions for maximum impact. (You may
question: what if I don't care about the
impact of my writing? Well, that's a
discussion for another day.)
So here's an easy
variation: make the subject plural:
When teachers give
timely feedback, their students benefit.
Ask all the guests
what toppings they want on their ice cream sundaes.
If children ask for
presents from Santa, adults try their hardest to get them for them.
Now a final word
about writing rules. The British
essayist and novelist George Orwell said, after giving a list of five writing
rules, gave a sixth rule which I apply to all writing rules I share with
you:
Break any of these rules sooner than say anything
outright barbarous.
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